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    dots Submission Name: In his arms(Reposted)dots
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    Author: redeemer
    ASL Info:    19/female/venus
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 85/93/58
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1212
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       I took some advice from a comment I received on the original version...I hope that this is better...kisses~Ashley~


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    dotsIn his arms(Reposted)dots
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    I lay, this man by my side...
    Tears role down my face...
    But it's not because I'm upset...
    And it's not because he's hurt me...
    Rather, it's because of the way he loves me...
    It just brings me to tears...

    I watch his eyelashes flutter...
    As he lays asleep...
    The hair on his face feels like little needles under my hand...
    Yet, it soothes my soul to stroke his face this way...
    His face shifts and he leans his head into my hand...
    I kiss him...
    A smile creeps across his face....
    His dream continues...

    I turn away from him...
    And wipe my tears...
    I lay my head on the pillow beside him...
    I feel cold and shiver...
    He senses that I need him to keep me warm...
    And pulls me close and holds me tight...
    His muscular frame wraps around my body...
    I feel his heartbeat against my back...
    Soon we will dream together...




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      I cant count the nights that i've layed in bed next to my boyfriend... and just watched him sleep, and like in this piece, i cant help but lean in and kiss him, or touch him... or, just wrap myself around him, while i wonder whats going on behind his fluttering eyes.

    i really loved this piece. you touched the depths of my soul with this, and i thank you for the wonderful read.

    -Poetic
    | Posted on 2007-02-23 00:00:00 | by Poetic | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh wow...I think I felt every word of this. There's something about spending the night with the man that you love. I think it takes relationships to a whole new level....by just sleeping in the same bed. Watching someone sleep, watching them dream.....is something really beautiful and it should be treasured. I think you really showed how much love these two feel for each other, and it brought a smile to my face just thinking about the two lovers sleeping together. Thanks for that. Great write. ~hailie~
    | Posted on 2007-02-21 00:00:00 | by loveispain | [ Reply to This ]


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