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...Shut the fuck up


Author: Black-Death
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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...Shut the fuck up



...
Shut the fuck up...
Let my wrists bleed out...
Let the scars Scream out!
SHUT UP!...
Let the needles Suck dry blood..
Let the tracks Come out!
SHUT UP BITCH
Your going to finaly hear me...
Your going to fianly Look at the pain Bleed out!
SHUT THE FUCK UP!
You did this...
YOU CAUSED ALL THIS TO COME OUT...
you... all of this pain...
Caused by... me...




Submitted on 2007-02-22 00:14:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  hmm realy angry and emotinal good right
| Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by Spit | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow, why are you so angry? I like it don't get me wrong!!
*kate
| Posted on 2007-02-23 00:00:00 | by koolness | [ Reply to This ]


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