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...Shut up...

Author: Black-Death
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...Shut up...

Shut the fuck up...
Let my wrists bleed out...
Let the scars Scream out!
Let the needles Suck dry blood..
Let the tracks Come out!
Em i to loud for you!
Well to bad bitch!
Your going to Hear out!.
Move again and il beat the shit out of you!
How Could you let OUT!

Submitted on 2007-02-22 00:14:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  sounds like alot of heart brake problems that are unsloved alot of people feel like that have hate for one another kind of interesting to hear other peoples thought on hate, tyson
| Posted on 2007-02-22 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]

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