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    dots Submission Name: GODS GREATEST GIFTdots
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    Author: Bones
    ASL Info:    40/M/ALABAMA
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 11/10/18
    Words: 315
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 779
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    Description:
       THIS POEM IS IN MEMORY OF A SPECIAL LIL GIRL AND OUR CHILDREN THET MANY HAVE LOST


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    dotsGODS GREATEST GIFTdots
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    GOD GIVETH, GOD TAKETH;
    GOD WORKTH IN MYSTERIS WAYS,
    GOD GIVES US LITTLE BONDELS OF JOY;
    GOD ALOWS US TO TAKE CARE OF HIS LITTLE CHILDREN,
    THEY FEEL OUR LIVES FULL OF JOY
    AND BLESSES US SO MUCH;
    WE NEVER KNOW HOW LONG WE HAVE
    WITH THESE BLESSED CHILDREN,
    THEY STAY IN OUR HEARTS FOR EVER AND EVER;
    SOME OF US NEVER KNOW
    HOW MUCH WE ARE BLESSED UNTILL IT`S TO LATE,
    OTHERS JUST DON`T CARE;
    WE ASK EACH AND EVERY PERSON
    THAT READS THIS TO STOP AND THINK,
    JUST HOW BLESSED WE ALL ARE
    TO HAVE A CHILD IN OUR LIVES;
    WE GET SO ANGRY AT TIMES
    OVER THE LITTLE THINGS THAT A CHILD DOES,
    STOP AND THINK HOW MANY SCARES
    IT PUTS ON THEM EVERY TIME WE SAY
    ONE ANGRY WORD TO THEM THAT WE SHOULD NOT SAY;
    JUST BECOUSE WE DO NOT THINK
    OF THE HURTFUL WORDS
    THAT WE SOMETIMES SAY TO THEM,
    SOME CHILDREN DO NOT COMPREHEND THINGS
    LIKE WE THINK THEY SHOULD;
    RYLEE RANEA WAS JUST 3 WHEN HER FAMILY LOST HER,
    SHE HAD MORE LOVE IN HER HEART
    THAN MOST ADULTS HAVE
    FOR THE ONE THEY LOVE THE MOST;
    AS DO ALL LITTLE CHILDREN,
    THEY GIVE YOU THEIR LOVE AND THEIR TRUST;
    IT IS UP TO US TOO KEEP THEM SAFE,
    THEIR ARE TIMES NO MATTER HOW HARD
    WE TRY WE CAN`T;
    HELP KEEP OUR CHILDREN SAFE,
    THEY ARE TO SPECIAL TO THROW AWAY;
    GIVE OUR CHILDREN ALL THE LOVE YOU CAN,
    I LOVEING MEMORY OF RYLEE RANEA;
    SHE DIED FROM A FIRE THIS PAST YEAR BEFOR EASTER,
    KEEP HER LOVEING FAMILY IN YOUR PRAYERS;

    WRITTEN BY: WILLIAM D THOMPSON




    Submitted on 2007-02-22 02:17:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I agree, They are our responsibility but not because they are our children but because they are a blessing to the world,

    Nicely done

    Clyde
    | Posted on 2007-02-28 00:00:00 | by Wisdom Seeker | [ Reply to This ]
      good poem. i think ill look at my little sisters differently from now on...
    | Posted on 2007-02-22 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]


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