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    dots Submission Name: untitleddots

    Author: kapri49
    ASL Info:    16/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 31/69/30
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       This is probably the worst poem I've written but It explains how I feel..I hope you all like it better than I do

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    Sometimes I think it's too hard
    I think I can't go on
    This dating game is hard on me
    And I'm not sure how to play it.

    I've always been the independant type
    Never counting on no one else
    But you've got me needing you
    Just to pull me through

    I've got to much riding on this
    There's to much left at stake
    My mind is begging me to run
    Begging me to hide

    But with every sabotaging thought
    My heart is breaking
    But I'm no longer taking the easy way around
    I'm in this til the end

    No running off
    No hiding out
    I'm in this
    Til you throw me out

    Submitted on 2007-02-22 12:25:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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