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    dots Submission Name: "Recollections"dots
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    Author: Drifting Star
    ASL Info:    19/F/Somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 22/101/73
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 983
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Drama assignment. Write a poem based on the play "Wuthering Heights High".

    Far From Elite,

    -Sennie.


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    dots"Recollections"dots
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    In June, amid the golden fields,
    dreams are more solid than reality;
    I am happy, quite true,
    Wrapped in teh arms of the one I love.

    My mind, however,
    drifts back and forth...to and fro;
    back to things I used to know...
    Golden hair and sapphire eyes,
    and three friends, guiliess in repose.

    One remains there before me,
    as the vision fades away;
    but the other is gone, unwilling...
    to be artless once again.

    In my mind though, I smile because-
    whether she knows it or not-
    all losses are restored-
    and all sorrow ended.

    **




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      I feel like Special Fred just hit me with a brick over my head.
    I absolutely love it.
    However, I cannot help but go back to the end and wonder what you mean...thinking that I might know, but I something tells me to hold my tongue.
    it takes me to that place and I watch it happening.

    Never was a true lover of poetry, but I can say with all honesty that I like this very much.

    -Dale
    | Posted on 2007-05-11 00:00:00 | by Nearby Thoughts | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, I really enjoyed this one! Great job on the wording!
    | Posted on 2007-02-23 00:00:00 | by SammySueYou | [ Reply to This ]


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