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    dots Submission Name: Emocidedots
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    Author: Revan Onasi
    ASL Info:    17
    Elite Ratio:    0.8 - 0/2/7
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
    Total Views: 503
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 622



    Description:
       Please stop writing suicide "poetry" if you were going to do it you wouldn't be talking about it, YOU FOOL ONLY YOURSELF!


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    dotsEmocidedots
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    This is your pain,
    a withering thing.
    It haunts your eyes
    yet leaves in spring.

    It sickens the gullet.
    When you speak
    of the lies of which
    your pen doth reek.

    The way you pretend
    and cheapen our
    bittersweet memories,
    you blight and mar.

    Your death is slow
    riding on impatient backs.
    I know I plead in vain,
    Courage in cutters, lacks.

    That is now my pain
    Delusions cloud your perceptions
    you think this isn't about you.
    Not poetry just deceptions.




    Submitted on 2007-02-22 17:55:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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