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    dots Submission Name: IS IT SILLY, STUPED, NUTS OR CRAZY dots
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    Author: Bones
    ASL Info:    40/M/ALABAMA
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 11/10/18
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       THIS IS THE WAY I FELT FOR YEARS, SOON AFTER THIS POEM WAS WRITTEN I FOUND SOME ONE SPECIAL AND SHE HAS TWO KIDS I LOVE AS MY OWN; I HAD TO GO TOO A FUNERAL THIS PAST WEEK AND IT WAS LIKE PULLING EYE TEETH BEING AWAY FROM THEM; IT FELT LIKE I WAS GONE A MONTH, NOT TEN DAYS


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    dots IS IT SILLY, STUPED, NUTS OR CRAZY dots
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    IS IT SILLY, STUPED, NUTS OR CRAZY
    Current mood: depressed
    Category: Romance and Relationships

    LOVE IS NOT SILLY, STUPED, NUTS OR BEING CRAZY;
    LOVEING SOME ONE IS A BEAUTIFUL AND WORNDERFUL THING,
    IF LOVE COMES YOUR WAY GRAB IT WHILE YOU CAN;
    DON`T NOT LET IT GO BUT SEARCH YOUR HEART,
    YOUNG AND OLD TO MAKE SURE IT`S LOVE;
    FOR SOME LOVE COMES AND GOES MANY TIMES,
    BUT FOR SOME OF US LOVE ONLY COMES AROUND ONCE IN A LIFE TIME;
    SO DON`T LET LOVE PASS YOU BY AND IF YOU FEEL YOU HAVE FOUND YOUR TRUE LOVE,
    LET NO ONE TURN YOU AWAY FROM THE ONE YOU LOVE;
    LIKE I DID WHEN I WAS YOUNG AND JUST COMEING OUT OF MY TEENS;
    DON`T LET LOVE PASS YOU BUY,
    TAKE AHOLD OF IT WITH EVERYTHING YOU HAVE AND MORE OR YOU`LL BE LIKE ME;
    I AM GROWING OLD WITH NO ONE TO LOVE,
    NO ONE TO HOLD,
    NO KIDS OF MY OWN AND THE QUESTION IS,
    IS THEIR ANY HOPE LEFT FOR ME
    NOW THAT I AM FORTY AND FEEL THAT I AM DIEING
    A LITTLE EACH DAY INSIDE FROM LONELYNESS

    WRITTEN BY WILLIAM D THOMPSON JR




    Submitted on 2007-02-23 01:50:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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