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    dots Submission Name: Nightmaredots
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    Author: darkness child
    ASL Info:    21/F/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 195/266/48
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 681
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    Description:
       Just something I wrote for a project at school.


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    dotsNightmaredots
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    No one is here
    In this place of dreams
    Giant monsters, I'm
    Hiding quietly
    Too afraid to
    Move, Oh God
    Am I awake? I
    Refuse to accept this
    Evil as my reality




    Submitted on 2007-02-23 15:36:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You could have used a lot more creativity with that one. Not to be judging because I need it more than anybody. You night like my poem Where Nightmares Collide. You'll see what I mean about more imagination.
    | Posted on 2007-02-23 00:00:00 | by ashlee_jane2003 | [ Reply to This ]


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