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    dots Submission Name: Somethin I wrote last year at work. HAHAHAHAdots
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    Author: DrewDilla
    ASL Info:    25/M/Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 131/196/51
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 1005
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       I spilled some pop cause there alot spillen out the garbage I was cleaning on my pants by my privets so it looked like I peed my pants.


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    dotsSomethin I wrote last year at work. HAHAHAHAdots
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    Some reason it looks like I peed my pants

    Maybe if I stand in a new stance

    It wonít look like I did

    But this one little kid

    Said ď MOMMY MOMMY LOOK AT HIS JEANS

    THERE NOT TO CLEANĒ

    So Iím typing this in Dans office

    On his comp he is my boss

    Look here comes Marshall

    He said dry it up by hell

    He means to stand in the sun

    Then jump into a bun

    Cause it roasts u like a hot dog

    All burnt cause there is no fog

    It been 10 min and didnít dry

    Now I still wonder why

    It didnít leave a little

    So let me bust out my fiddle

    So you can start to jiggle

    Making my legs start to wiggle

    Then say u thought it would work

    Now Iím starting to go berserk

    Cause the stain wonít go away

    Now there ainít no sun ray

    So now they wonít see in the dark

    But thereís lights in the ball park




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    ||| Comments |||
      Hehe. This one made me lol. I'm guessing that it was just a joke poem, written for fun. Kewl Kewl.

    Duv
    | Posted on 2008-01-24 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]
      lmao
    dude im starting to get off on your writes.
    | Posted on 2007-06-03 00:00:00 | by GiveMeTheGun | [ Reply to This ]
      are you serious? you're not even trying.
    | Posted on 2007-04-14 00:00:00 | by HappyBuddaH | [ Reply to This ]
      um.... this one is kind of.... ummm.... odd. Is that the word I'm looking for?
    | Posted on 2007-02-23 00:00:00 | by ashlee_jane2003 | [ Reply to This ]


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