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Somethin I wrote last year at work. HAHAHAHA

Author: DrewDilla
ASL Info:    25/M/Chicago
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I spilled some pop cause there alot spillen out the garbage I was cleaning on my pants by my privets so it looked like I peed my pants.

Somethin I wrote last year at work. HAHAHAHA

Some reason it looks like I peed my pants

Maybe if I stand in a new stance

It won’t look like I did

But this one little kid



So I’m typing this in Dans office

On his comp he is my boss

Look here comes Marshall

He said dry it up by hell

He means to stand in the sun

Then jump into a bun

Cause it roasts u like a hot dog

All burnt cause there is no fog

It been 10 min and didn’t dry

Now I still wonder why

It didn’t leave a little

So let me bust out my fiddle

So you can start to jiggle

Making my legs start to wiggle

Then say u thought it would work

Now I’m starting to go berserk

Cause the stain won’t go away

Now there ain’t no sun ray

So now they won’t see in the dark

But there’s lights in the ball park

Submitted on 2007-02-23 17:29:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hehe. This one made me lol. I'm guessing that it was just a joke poem, written for fun. Kewl Kewl.

| Posted on 2008-01-24 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]
dude im starting to get off on your writes.
| Posted on 2007-06-03 00:00:00 | by GiveMeTheGun | [ Reply to This ]
  are you serious? you're not even trying.
| Posted on 2007-04-14 00:00:00 | by HappyBuddaH | [ Reply to This ]
  um.... this one is kind of.... ummm.... odd. Is that the word I'm looking for?
| Posted on 2007-02-23 00:00:00 | by ashlee_jane2003 | [ Reply to This ]

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