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    dots Submission Name: I Just Can't Tear Them Downdots
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    Author: pattopping
    Elite Ratio:    0.8 - 0/2/7
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    Description:
       A poem similar to Mending Wall I suppose. In idealogy, not quality.


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    dotsI Just Can't Tear Them Downdots
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    There are walls surrounding my garden
    protecting the flowers and the plants from
    harm.

    But I cannot help but notice,
    that the walls that protect this garden
    are so high
    higher even, than I initially can see
    that they deprive the plants
    of that food which we all need,
    that light that shines
    and makes us flourish.

    And I cannot help but notice
    that the barbed wire that
    hangs ornately around the top
    of these walls makes my neighbors
    into my enemies.

    But all the same I keep it.
    I keep my walls and the barbed wire
    and I keep my garden inside.
    Though I know they'll never reach
    their full potential...
    I just can't tear down the wall.




    Submitted on 2007-02-23 21:22:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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