Hey hey wait a sec, why is the syllable count next to each line? It's completely ruining the way most people would read it, e.g. imagine you were reading a research paper and suddenly a number pops out and says "Hi, I'm the syllable count". =.="
Disregarding that, the rhyme scheme is changing, sometimes AAAA, or AABB. That and some of the lines that are too short disrupt the reading unless of course the rhyme is deliberate. Then I have to say it would be a problem with your flow that is throwing me off.
However I like the last two lines. I think they're well written.