If I were with you
then what would it be like
would the touch of your hand make me shiver
or would it make me turn away
would you even dare to
cause you're really shy
but I'm infatuated by you
and it's really hard cause it makes me feel
and I am scared to
cause I know deep down inside
that you might not want me
and then I will be hurt
and I don't want to be
I understand what you were going for but I feel it was lost in the writing. I'm sure you can do better and I agree, "cause" or even "because" can be stricken from the writing for a better term. Keep working at it.
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