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    dots Submission Name: Staring at the looking glassdots
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    Author: StylerDen
    ASL Info:    23/Male/Malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 38/52/43
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
    Total Views: 154
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    dotsStaring at the looking glassdots
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    Staring at the mirror, for minutes to pass
    Looking back at me, the person that i am
    So tough and strong, outer appearance that lies
    Within a molded glass, it breaks and it revived

    The image that stares, so cold in his eyes
    I do not recognize, who is he, who am i?
    Loudness breaks free, shattered glass subside
    The image still is there, looking from inside

    Deceiving and lying, of words that's evil
    Looking back at me, from the realm of the devil
    Staring at the mirror, for minutes to pass by
    Looking back at me, i do not understand why




    Submitted on 2007-02-24 08:53:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Interesting.. reminds me of my piece Visions. This poem kind of leaves me wanting more though. I think another closing stanza would be nice. Just my opinion though. Kepp writing
    | Posted on 2007-02-24 00:00:00 | by JAcksonJr | [ Reply to This ]



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