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    dots Submission Name: Sitting heredots
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    Author: Nagow
    ASL Info:    20/f/Denmark
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 56/70/29
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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       I wrote this one night before going to bed..

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    dotsSitting heredots
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    Sitting here writting in silence
    the night embraces all sounds
    it hides the rood violence
    and makes the world go around

    Sitting here writting in peace
    no worries are found in this room
    outside you'll find the desease
    that's where you'll find your tomb

    Sitting here writting at night
    cause now I have time to think
    I should get rid of my fright
    I should find my link

    Sitting here writting outside
    knowing the world is strange
    it doesn't help to hide
    I should widen my range

    Sitting here writting in silence
    Embracing what the world is
    There is a lot of violence
    but it can't stop me from this




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