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    dots Submission Name: Steamed Thoughtsdots
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    Author: Deadly Sauce
    ASL Info:    18--lady--NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 59/77/31
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Prose/Depressed
    Total Views: 134
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 511



    Description:
       A random bit of prose that started coming to me in the shower.


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    dotsSteamed Thoughtsdots
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    The shower stall makes me claustrophobic. I focus on the hot water hitting my back and dribbling off my bottom and down my thighs. I can feel my skin glowing red. Pushing my fists into my eyes, I rub them in hopes that what I see next is better than the moment before. Nope. I sigh defeatedly and take inventory of my current situation. I realize that there's really no reason for all this, as real as it seems.

    Sometimes I wonder if I'm nearly half as crazy as I feel most of the time.




    Submitted on 2007-02-24 17:47:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Lol. I love that. I laugh because I related it to how sometimes, when I'm in the shower, I close my eyes and pretend I'm thin. Is that what you're talking about? Or is it more "I hate this place..." Either way it's good. It would be an interesting short story. Woo for potential.

    <3 -Becca
    | Posted on 2007-02-24 00:00:00 | by thesacredone | [ Reply to This ]



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