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You Fucking... Bitch


Author: Black-Death
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You Fucking... Bitch



You...
Made me cut..
Made me cry..
You..
Took out my heart..
Let me watch it die...
Crushed it into your hands...
and yet.. i crawl back to you...
On my keens...
But this time im giving you my heart...
...this time you decided to play with it..
This time you decided to slowly cut it..
Slowly... let it heal...
Say you love me..
Then rip a peace of it off..
then gave it back....
i come crawling back...
Giving you my heart...
This time black cold...
You warm it.. let it heal...
Then you throw it in the snow...
and watch it go black...
And hand it back...
But no more...
No more you cunt...
This is the end.. You lost something that would of loved you forever...
You lost me..
No more..
Im tierd
Tierd of your lies!
Tierd of you telling me you loved me...
Tierd.. of the pain...




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