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    dots Submission Name: Remedy:To Never Letting Your Feelings Showdots
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    Author: bassnguitar13
    ASL Info:    15/f/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.02 - 23/13/11
    Words: 280
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 114
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1245



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       A song I wrote for my band. Not sure if I like it enough to use it yet,Feedback please!


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    dotsRemedy:To Never Letting Your Feelings Showdots
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    You always say you love me, but I know your hearts not there. Tell me would you notice if my heart stopped beating? Don't you know--my hearts been more than bleeding. Thoughts of you keep on breaking me.
    (CHORUS:)My heart dissolved at your hand. I tried to not let the lonliness consume me, but there's only so much you can do before it kills you. All this time I've been waiting. Your voice was so captivating. But now I know, you were with her when you said you loved me. You don't know how you controlled me, but through it all I still wasn't enogh for you.(End Chorus)
    Alone looking at pictures of you and me surrounding me. These past few days have flown right by me. Changing more with each passing day. I've lost faith in everything I had to say. You said it wouldn't matter if I were to fade, after you stole my voice and my will to stay.
    (CHORUS REPEATS)
    Break me down, until I'm right beside you. How come to be real to you, I have to make sure I never let my feelings show. You said we were ment to be forever, but forever died today. CI wish we could have found another way.
    (CHORUS REPEAT)




    Submitted on 2007-02-24 21:39:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awwwwww!!! Stop making me cry!!!!! jkjk
    | Posted on 2007-03-09 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]



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