Radiant Tickles by SilverScent

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Submission Name: Radiant Tickles dots

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Author:	SilverScent
ASL Info:	19/Female/England
Elite Ratio:	3.74 - 94/106/71
Words:	31

Class/Type:	Poetry/Nature
Total Views:	65
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	238

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Radiant Tickles dots

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Silver patterns
on supple arms,
test frosted water
- timid.

Hands part - to bare
healing carnelian.

And jewels melt
as radiant tickles
stroke the bud
to wake.

Submitted on 2007-02-25 09:24:39 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
I love this. It makes me think of nature as soft and delicate. I think this is a beautiful poem. I like how you use dashes to show another part of what you're describing at the moment. I do the same thing in my poetry. Very pretty. Favorited.
| Posted on 2007-02-25 00:00:00 | by awastedsky | [ Reply to This ]

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