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    dots Submission Name: You can never...(part1)dots
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    Author: Mr.Ordinary
    ASL Info:    21/M/Navy
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 64/102/41
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 659
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 221



    Description:
       (part one in the series)ill be honnest this one rymes and i suck at it but i love the first four lines the end is just filler i guess mabey i should delete it


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    dotsYou can never...(part1)dots
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    You can never be found
    If you were never lost
    The world is bound
    And youíre the boss

    Kiss the ground
    And kiss the moss
    Donít fear a sound
    Or the early frost




    Submitted on 2007-02-25 10:56:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think it's simple, but it means something. It's kinda cool, and it tells the truth. I think it's great.
    | Posted on 2007-02-25 00:00:00 | by Ceasing End | [ Reply to This ]


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