Description: yeah ive been working on this alot its not done becasue its not perfect but i wanted to see what you all think
Just a girl -------------------------------------------
Just a girl
So simple
Nothing complex
Nothing to worry about
They enjoyed every moment
As the perfect moment it was
Held hands for the first time
Looked into each others eyes
And fell in love
Truly
For the very first time
But it hurt when she slammed the door in his face
But nothing is lost forever
When love is on your side
Eventually after the pain had faded
She came back to hold hands
Looked into each others eyes
And fell in love again
He had never felt so lost
For the man that he had come to be
Was not the one he had once been
The love was still there
But so was the pain
He called upon the hourglass
To tell him how life will be
If you ever met this man you would know
Its me
I realy like this.. the story is great and I actualy cant find anything that would need to be changed... So is this girl still on your mind?
Candy (amanda)
Submission Name: Just a girl
