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    dots Submission Name: Amante del Amordots
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    Author: homeless
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    7.61 - 29/18/23
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 740
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 538



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    dotsAmante del Amordots
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    Háblame
    no me hables
    Quiéreme
    No me quieras

    Búscame
    No me busques
    Necesítame
    No me necesites

    Amor es una idea
    Amante del amor
    Amor es una idea
    Tú no entiendes

    Háblame
    no me hables
    Quiéreme
    No me quieras

    Búscame
    No me busques
    Necesíteme
    No me necesites

    Toma mi corazón
    Pero no lo rompas
    Como una cazadora
    Su trofeo es su conquista




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