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    dots Submission Name: Amante de Amor - Lover of Love (English)dots
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    Author: homeless
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    7.61 - 29/18/23
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 1091
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 789



    Description:
       This is the english translation of Amante de Amor


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    dotsAmante de Amor - Lover of Love (English)dots
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    Speak to me
    You do not speak to me
    Love me
    You do not love me

    Look for me
    You do not look for me
    Need me
    You do not need me

    Love is an idea
    Lover of love
    Love is an idea
    You do not understand

    Speak to me
    You do not speak to me
    Love me
    You do not love me

    Look for me
    You do not look for me
    Need me
    You do not need me

    Take my heart
    But do not break it
    As a huntress
    Her trophy is her conquest

    Love me
    You do not love me
    Need me
    You do not need me

    Lover of love
    You do not understand
    Lover of love
    You do not understand




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