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    dots Submission Name: Interludesdots
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    Author: homeless
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    7.61 - 29/18/23
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 640
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 497



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    dotsInterludesdots
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    You came,
    To me
    For me
    With me

    Saying -

    Abhor me
    Whore me
    Adore me

    And -

    I want to feel you,
    In all your glory,
    Whole

    As you -

    Call to god,
    Scream my name
    Upon your skin
    Feel the rain

    Bringing -

    Shivering Satisfaction,
    Comfortable Conversation
    Post-coital Postulation,
    Soulful Salvation




    Submitted on 2007-02-25 23:23:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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