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    dots Submission Name: All Or Nothingdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 461
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 624



    Description:
       This Poem Was Written While Looking In A Mirror


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    dotsAll Or Nothingdots
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    In this world of hate and war,
    it seems as though I am wanted no more.
    I'm either too big or too small,
    too short, too tall.
    Too shallow, too proud,
    too quiet, too loud.
    Too cute, too gross,
    everything or nothing, never almost.
    Too happy, too sad,
    too good, too bad.
    Too weak, too strong,
    too right, too wrong.
    Too cheery, too depressed,
    too mangy, too over-dressed.
    Too scared, too brave,
    too wild, too behaved.
    No one is happy with who I am inside,
    I'm all or nothing, with everything to hide.




    Submitted on 2007-02-25 23:46:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very good. i really think that people can relate to it. again: i really like how you rhyme.
    | Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by bassnguitar13 | [ Reply to This ]
      judgements, judgements and more judgements. people tend to do that a lot regardless of what others might feel. i guess this is what we call 'life'. well written, can't agree more with you :)
    | Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by tina_mik | [ Reply to This ]
      Yep sounds like my life... ^_^
    | Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by Dark Divinity | [ Reply to This ]


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