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    dots Submission Name: I Love Youdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 290
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 652
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 1792



    Description:
       I Love You is Said So Often But Does Anyone Really Know What It Means Well Here Is What it Means To Me


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    Three little words I Love You,
    repeated everyday.
    What do those words mean to me?
    What would I have them say?
    To understand the whole,
    you must know every part.
    Each word has a special meaning,
    when looked at with the heart.

    The "I" means every bit of me,
    all that you can find;
    The outer me,the inner me,
    my soul, my heart, my mind.
    The caring me,
    the sharing me,
    The me that holds your hand.
    The me you like,
    the me you don't.
    Do you understand?
    The happy me,
    the laughing me,
    the me that wants to cry.
    All the things that make up me,
    make that single "I".

    The "You" means every bit of you,
    all that I can find;
    The outer you, the inner you, your heart soul and mind.
    The shy you, the gentle you,
    the you I want to touch.
    The special you, the hidden you,
    the you i need so much.
    The worried you, the sad you,
    the sweet you, and the glad you.
    All the things that make up you,
    make that simple "You".

    The "Love" is most important,
    for without it we can't live.
    It means to share, it means to care,
    it means to take and give.
    It means to laugh, it means to cry,
    it means to hug and kiss.
    It means to hold, it means to let go,
    and so much more then this.
    It means to be together, it means to have some fun.
    It means to help each other, it means to be as one.

    So no matter how it sounds,
    or wherever we may be.
    When I say " I Love You ",
    it means all this to me.




    Submitted on 2007-02-26 00:15:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Im here more for emotional reasons than to be a critic...this poem touched me in everyway possible. It said so many things that I would want to say but never had the words...I love it.
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by Dani2005 | [ Reply to This ]
      Awh... it's so cute!!!! I love it~
    love ya
    lizzie
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by babygirl09 | [ Reply to This ]
      good rhyming :]
    i like it a lot
    | Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by bassnguitar13 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like it.
    Caps is all I gotta say though.
    Other than that, I really like it.
    | Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by Dark Divinity | [ Reply to This ]


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