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Submission Name: ...and say it right dots

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Author:	DAlin
Elite Ratio:	2.13 - 82/137/71
Words:	86

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	112
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	511

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...and say it right dots

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Is this a world of beauty roses ?
Is this a world of kiss and tell ?
Is this a world of over doses ?
A place where you can sell your soul ?

Like animals we learned to kill
And like no other monster, run...
...Is this a master plan, a deal ?
Too bad, the damage is now here...and done.

Mirror by mirror
Day by day

Killer by killer
Night by night

Please say a prayer...
...and say it right.

Submitted on 2007-02-26 04:35:32 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  nice poem. i like how u ask a question and leave iyt with a .....

yeahh.
| Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
  this piece is so wonderful, it took me by surprise i'm still not quite sure waht to say about it. all i know is that i loved it.
Joanna
| Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
  I was astounded by this particular piece as the imagery was basic and yet soulful, I enjoy the way something as stunning as a rose was used and then was cut off by the 'overdoses'.
'Like animals we learned to kill' makes me feel bad for not being a vegetarian ;o) it makes me thing of evolution, a rather pleasant sort of nostalgia hehe.
'to bad, the damage is now here...and done' I think this is a strong sentiment especially given the current climatic issues, I like the use of this in regards to how dreadful the world can be sometimes.
Overall I thoroughly enjoyed it, soul food, one might say.
| Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by MornSweetSong | [ Reply to This ]

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