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It was a warm midsummer morning; I woke early to prepare. My family and I, All there, Some of our friends, too. We gathered in my uncle's yard To have a swim or two. Cooking out and playing games, Rhyming things with people's names. In the pool all day i'd be; Everyone would laugh at me; My shriveled fingers, my wet hair- We could have fun anywhere! In the house and in the alley, In the park across the street- I remember how it used to be. How I miss those summer days, Laughing, lazy, in the haze. We'd chase the ice-cream truck all day (Just for fun when we would play) Licking ice-cream as we ran; I think the driver's name was Dan... Looking back now i remember All the fun we used to have. But everyone's gone their separate ways- No more grand midsummer days... I wish i could go back in time To be with my summer-friends One last time. |
the rhyme didn't feel as sophisticated as it should but as you say, you were two years younger when you wrote it and i wrote some dross when i was younger that (thankfully) hasn't found its way onto this site! i love the theme, and while it's not completely original, it's one we can all identify with. i also love the last line which seems to convey your feelings really well of wanting to taste, experience, and have that time back again. nostalgia is a powerful thing and as we get older and have to face up to our responsibilities we experience a lot of sadness. take care. x | Posted on 2007-03-18 00:00:00 | by freeangel | [ Reply to This ] | Some of the rhymes sounded kinda forced here. But overall, it was good. I like the whole thinking back to the past when there was good times and a feeling of ''WOW' in the air. Makes me think to back when I was younger, like 4 or 5 years ago, and I always had this feeling that everything was fine and dandy, but as I get older I lose that feeling. Sad really. | But this was good. Yay for you Skipper! Soul | Posted on 2007-02-26 00:00:00 | by insphered soul | [ Reply to This ] | |