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    dots Submission Name: trusting and loving youdots
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    Author: lonely goth
    ASL Info:    17/F/Coucil Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 28/31/35
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 809
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 743



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    When you can tell them anything
    When they’re like you anchor to hold on to
    When their faith and love is everything
    Then they’re your angel to belong to

    When you can cry on their shoulder
    When they’re like the rock that keeps you strong
    When they’re your hero even when you’ve gotten older
    In their arms is where you belong

    When our hearts have become one
    When i know you’re always true
    When you shine brighter than the sun
    That’s me, trusting and loving you

    When you are the one who believed
    And always made sure I was ready
    And since you are the only one I’d ever need
    You are the brace, holding me steady




    Submitted on 2007-02-26 14:23:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i couldnt have said it better myself! i will give you 5 stars for this work. im glad that i felt like clicking on a random poem today becasue this made me feel better about how my day went because my love had to cry on my lap and wala here is this poem saying how great it is! so it must not be that bad
    | Posted on 2007-02-28 00:00:00 | by Mr.Ordinary | [ Reply to This ]


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