for a needless cause- a holocaust poem by lonely goth

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Author:	lonely goth
ASL Info:	17/F/Coucil Idaho
Elite Ratio:	3.83 - 28/26/27
Words:	106

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	182
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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i wrote this for an english class so yeah hope you like it

for a needless cause- a holocaust poem dots

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Lying
Crying
Feeling all loss

Fearing
Dying
Our lives it has cost

For a useless war
And worthless cause
Our blood shall pour
For a needless cause

In the middle of the night
They wander and lurk
They sure don’t care if were alright
I believe they enjoy to see us hurt.

I want to go home
Away from this pain
I feel so alone
I’m think I’m gonna go insane

It is useless being here
Why does God make me stay
I am filled with such fear
But Maybe I’ll make it, if Ijust run away

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