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Author: darkwiccan14
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Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Being a Teen
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The colours describe my mood,
From red to blue,
Although sometimes it isn't true,
And I end up getting screwed.

Red is the colour that,
Describes my fiery passion.
Yellow is the wind that,
Makes you hear me bellow.
Orange is just well,
My favourite colour!
Green is my horrid,
Envy cream.
Blue is the colour that may fit,
A girl named Sue (god she's annoying).
Purple is just a colour that i use if,
It doesn't make me hurl.
But the same goes to Pink,
The one true colour that tells u that i stink!
Brown is the colour that shows,
I'm icy cold chillllll,
And that tells you that i won't make a sound.
Gray is the colour that i wore today,
Because being emo was way "sway" (a word that me and my friends use to say awesome lol!)
And finally,
BLACK is the colour that always describes my mood,
But not really cuz i'm a really perky person who cant stop talking or depressed.....THAT MUCH! xD!

So these are what the colours make me feel,
I can feel at all...........

Submitted on 2007-02-26 18:25:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  hey, pink is an awesome color. it goes good with black. and i absolutely hate the color orange.

your poem was really expressive and i like the way you show
so much emotion. i can tell your a sarcastic and funny person by the way your poetry is. i can also see that you are a very confident kinda person.
| Posted on 2007-02-28 00:00:00 | by Impy | [ Reply to This ]

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