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    Author: social circus
    ASL Info:    16/M/LA
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 17/57/36
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    if i live to see the stars fall
    or listen for the birds last call
    or to see the suns last shine
    and drink my last cup of wine
    or feel your last touch
    or see you smile and then blush
    i will never be more hurt you see
    as the day you said you hate me.




    Submitted on 2007-02-26 23:03:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is so sad, you must really love this girl and she hurt you. i hate when things like that happen, hopefully it will get better soon. Joanna
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      aww. this is a bit sad. i love the flow of rhymes. i feel your pain.
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by AdrienneCale | [ Reply to This ]


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