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would cradle me...
More often than you ever did.
I always woke up
than before I fell asleep.
I would lay my head
In your armpit
You took me under your wing.
I truly wish,
I could kiss you again
It's hard to remember how it felt before...
I was in and out of our relationship
You were in and out of your mind.
never was it admitted...
so when it ended it didn't matter,
we had never started.
| The poem reflected the emptiness of a sexual relationship without a firm commitment of fidelity. You write very well. I only hope that at your tender age, this is merely a muse.||| Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by The Gadfly | [ Reply to This ] || i like this poem, it's sad and i understand some of the feelings you're putting across, i like the imagery you use, especially at the start. the ending is a little jarred, in that it doesn't flow as well as some of the other stanza's. other than that, i like it, well done|
|| Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by Kalinda | [ Reply to This ] |