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    dots Submission Name: DONE!dots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
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       sooo ya ... I don't know

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    So that's it, I'm done!
    I'M DONE!
    Playing games
    Which has my attention pulled in one direction
    As I'm all tied up in emotions and bullshit
    So I'm DONE!
    No more childish games
    We started them back in 2002
         And they needed to be stopped
         As soon as thet were started.
    As for you my friend
    Don't use your personal shit to get with me!
    Don't try those guilt trips!
    Don't use, try to use
    Our past aginist me!
    It AN'T gonna work
    GOT IT?

    Submitted on 2007-02-27 01:22:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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