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    dots Submission Name: DISfunctiondots
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    Author: nolram
    ASL Info:    29/M
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 58/61/33
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDISfunctiondots
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    Baby I'm in hell and I want you to know
    even though I scream at you, I really love you so.
    It's been so long since the hate in your eyes
    wasn't a reflection of my own
    the way I was despised
    I couldn't look away from you
    with your cold deadly gaze
    Now I'm in love with you
    and I show it in strange hurtful ways
    This is how I show affection.
    It's brutal and it's rough.
    I think everything else is boring
    I know I've said too much
    Cause opening up is one more thing
    hard to do unless
    it's with some sort of wedge spreading to waste the connection we had just the other day




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      If we can depend on somebody without controlling them, then the fear and resentment and disappointment can't come. But is it possible????????????????????????????????????

    All your poems make me think something that ends with a question!
    | Posted on 2009-06-16 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]


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