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    dots Submission Name: Firedots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFiredots
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    How many days or ways,
    Will it take you to learn,
    If you throw yourself in to the fire,
    You will always get burned,
    The match you struck,
    Can never stay lit,
    The flame dies out,
    And the heat will quit,
    In seconds it beckons,
    Beseeches and die,
    The flame withers out,
    As swatted fireflies,
    So how many days,
    Or ways will it take you to learn,
    If you throw yourself into love,
    You will always get burned.




    Submitted on 2007-02-27 08:55:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the beat to this a lot. It is serious, and realistic. Very good.
    | Posted on 2007-02-28 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]


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