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    dots Submission Name: Emo shitdots
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    Author: Poetic
    ASL Info:    21/Female/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    7.94 - 78/39/19
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       I dont think a lot of people really understand what emo is.. when they here "cutter" they associate that with emo. but there is a big difference between someone who is emo, and someone who is a cutter. Emo's are people who do it to get attention, they will barely cut themselves, then run around showing their "scars" to their friends and what not. a cutter on the other hand, is someone with a seriously problem, who really NEEDS help... but will hardly ever utter a word of it to anyone. Cutters are those who cut themselves so deep, they could probably really bleed to death... they are the ones who wear long sleeve shirts in the dead of summer to hide their scars.

    What made me think about this, is i was reading something that someone posted on here. and their poem had NOTHING at all to do with cutting... it did have to do with depression, but not cutting. and in the description of the poem, they said who they were getting their feelings out... and how it was better than cutting. and a REAL cutter never would have said that... because 9 out of 10 cutters dont want anyone to know that they mutilate their bodies to feel better about themselves. Emo's piss me off... thats all. because their isnt a damn thing wrong with them, other than they want attention. you guys seriously need to get a grip and get over it, there are people out there who really DO have a problem with this............


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    dotsEmo shitdots
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    I'm sick of all these emo's shit
    Dabbling in something they just dont get
    Showing you how they cut their wrist
    They take a good life and add a twist

    Dont tell me how your life's fucked up
    Cause I know this story well enough
    I've seen your kind so dont even try
    I'm sick of hearing this empty lie

    You do this shit to get attention
    Like its a kind of honorable mention
    I've seen so many people just like you
    Who cut their wrist to have something to do

    But there are people who try to hide
    Who cut themselves just to survive
    To stop the cutting they do try,
    But bleeding lets them know they're alive

    So dont dabble in something you dont get
    Or show me how you cut your wrist
    Cause i dont care, not one bit
    I'm sick of all your emo shit.





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      The last line in the second to last line reminded me of a song I used to listen to a really long time ago; Iris by the Goo Goo Dolls, “Yea we bleed just to know we’re alive”. Anyways it was a good song then. It was a great piece and I completely agree. A friend of mine had a friend of his slit her wrists and he is always going off when he sees the goth wannabes with the scratches all over their arms. The only suggestion I have here is perhaps a little punctuation for the sake of emphasis.
    ~SonAsylum aka Aaron
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by SonAsylum | [ Reply to This ]
      I adore this, it really reached out to me. I agree completely, although perhaps not in its entirety. As I have a friend who cut herself before, very badly, only now she will admit that she had a problem, she's getting help. Emo's make me sick too with all of this 'Oh my life sucks, no one understands'. Welcome to my life.
    <gets back to critique> The words were harsh and vibrant, they poke fun at an all too familiar genre, whilst addressing a most serious issue and making clear the unmistakable feeling of the verse.
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by MornSweetSong | [ Reply to This ]



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