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    dots Submission Name: Real friends and Fake friendsdots
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    Author: Dark Divinity
    ASL Info:    20 Male Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 23/20/8
    Words: 245
    Class/Type: Misc/Friendship
    Total Views: 1604
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1435



    Description:
       THis is how life should be. Read it and know who your real friends are.


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    dotsReal friends and Fake friendsdots
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    FAKE FRiENDS: Never ask for food.
    REAl FRiENDS: are the reason you have no food.
    FAKE FRiENDS: Call your parents Mr/Mrs
    REAl FRiENDS: Call your parents DAD/MOM
    FAKE FRiENDS: bail you out of jail and tell you what you did was wrong.
    REAl FRiENDS: Would sit next to you sayin "Damn ... we fucked up ... but that shit was fun!"
    FAKE FRiENDS: never seen you cry.
    REAl FRiENDS: cry with you
    FAKE FRiENDS: Borrow your stuff for a few days then give it back.
    REAl FRiENDS: keep your shit so long they forget its yours.
    FAKE FRiENDS: know a few things about you.
    REAl FRiENDS: Could write a book about you with direct quotes from you.
    FAKE FRiENDS: Will leave you behind if that is what the crowd is doing.
    REAl FRiENDS: Will kick the whole crowds ass that left you.
    FAKE FRiENDS: Would knock on your front door.
    REAl FRiENDS: Walk right in and say "I'M HOME!"
    FAKE FRiENDS: Are for awhile.
    REAl FRiENDS: Are for life.
    FAKE FRiENDS: Will take your drink away when they think you've had enough.
    REAl FRiENDS: Will look at you stumbling all over the place and say "Bitch drink the rest of that you know we don't waste shit."
    FAKE FRiENDS: will talk shit to the person who talks shit about you.
    REAl FRiENDS: Will knock them the fuck out




    Submitted on 2007-02-27 11:02:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is an amazing poem i know how it is to have fake and real friends but u know all those fake [censored]es are just haters and if they act like they are ur friend then they wana be like you.... really gr8 poem tho
    | Posted on 2007-12-14 00:00:00 | by lonelygal_212 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is sooo cool, i luv it :P
    its so true as well it made me laugh on a few of the points, everyone deserves to have true friends and im glad i do :)
    great job it was original and kept me reading till i finsihed
    | Posted on 2007-12-13 00:00:00 | by Specialme | [ Reply to This ]
      Hahaha, you're right I do know who my real friends are now ^_^
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so true it scares me. Ive read something similar before, only this one has a different take on it. Refreshing, a break from my usual dire straits. Thanks for a great read.


    Leah
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by MornSweetSong | [ Reply to This ]
      this had me laughing. good write mann. its really true. If u start a fight with someone and then tell a fake friend they will be like why did u do that that is wrong. and a good friend will be like mann i wish i were there to beat the shyt out of thaT stupid ass emo.


    good write mannn

    peace
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      HA HA HA!! this is os true! I like this it made me laugh, its very clever!!!
    *kate
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by koolness | [ Reply to This ]


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