I think you've taken a very calm road towards parting a friendship. It's as though it was meant to be and there is great understanding as to why this friendship cannot work. Most people that i know, they either stop talk totally and view the person as an enemy or they fight till they can't fight no more and then part. But yours is totally different. It's as though it was coming all the time and there is no tension when the day comes that you say "okay well it's not working out".
It was a short straight forward piece. One thing i would have loved to see a bit more is the detail. I'm wondering what you've done to break that friendship. It's still a bit unclear to me.
I really like this one man . . . . . . . . . . . . . sometimes it feel like certain friendships will never work out. I especially like the last part of this piece. It's very calm and serene yet it has so much emotion.
Submission Name: Farewell
