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Submission Name:
Unaware
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Author:
SilentDreams42
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It's hard when people go from loving you to acting as if you don't matter.....
especially if you're close to them
Unaware
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unaware
you didn't even bother
to mention the separation
to mention the divorce
unaware
you didn't even bother
to tell me it was the end
you didn't even bother
to tell me that there was no chance
it seems
like there was only one moment
you showed me that you cared
you consoled me
but that chapter is over
you are now unaware
you don't seem to care anymore
you don't seem to show your love
I lay down
and try to shut my eyes
try to shut out my pain
try to forget
but it's not the same
it's so hard without you
but you are so unaware
unaware
you don't care
you don't hurt
you don't feel
you don't love
Submitted on 2007-02-27 18:14:25
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this is raw cool. good write.
DUDE tell me.
laterrrrrrrrrrr
Aylin
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