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Circle of Chains

Author:	Trifecta
ASL Info:	14.male.Somewhere
Elite Ratio:	5.58 - 32 /34 /28
Words:	259

Class/Type:	Lyrics /Trapped
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"Your face can take a lot of punishment. That's good to know."

Circle of Chains

Waste me

Break me down to nothing but a skeleton
Strip me down to part a man and part a sin
Do what you will
I will take it all with pride
I will see you on the other side

This is all I know about myself
I know that one day I will die
Until then I'll swallow the pain
I'll wrap myself in a circle of chains

This time I know the fight
This time I know that it's you
But sooner or later
This body won't endure anymore

Waste me

Cut me apart to nothing in this hurricane
Rip me to pieces with that evil grin again
I will take it without shame
I will let you play your game

This is all I know about myself
I know that one day I will die
Until then I'll swallow the pain
I'll wrap myself in a circle of chains

This time I know the fight
This time I know that it's you
But sooner or later
This body won't endure anymore

Waste
Waste
Waste, waste
Waste me

Waste
Waste
Waste, waste
WASTE ME!

This is all I know about myself
I know that one day I will die
Until then I'll swallow the pain
I'll wrap myself in a circle of chains

This time I know the fight
This time I know that it's you
But sooner or later
This body won't endure anymore

Circle, circle, circle of chains
Circle, circle, circle of chains!

Comments

Break me down to / / a skeleton
Strip me / to part / man and part / sin (better flow)
Do what you will
I will take it / with pride
I will see you on the other side

This is all I know about myself
/ / / one day I will die
Until then I'll swallow the pain
/wrap myself in a circle of chains

This time I know the fight
This time I know / it's you
But sooner or later
This body won't endure /

Cut me / to nothing in this hurricane
Rip me to pieces with that evil grin again
I will take it without shame
I will let you play your game

Obviously, this may [censored] up the flow of your song utterly. But, as I can't hear it with music, I edited it as a poem. To many thats, ands and buts dilute the power of a poem (or song, which this is, of course), so this is what I'd do. Again, it probably sounds completely different with music. Really good, it gave me goose bumps. I just thought it could cut down to barer bones for a more dramatic effect.

| Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by Clarkie | [ Reply to This ]

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