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    dots Submission Name: Give Me A Trydots
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    Author: StylerDen
    ASL Info:    23/Male/Malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 38/51/41
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 135
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 987



    Description:
       A Song i wrote some time ago, got chords and all in, but just cant put the recorded version in, dang, it's in "G"


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    dotsGive Me A Trydots
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    (Verse 1:)
    Hey You, the girl with the brown eyes
    Yes You, your light catches my eyes
    It's true, i think i'm in love with you...
    I See, a future ahead off
    U Me, would be the talk of the nation
    Coz you've been, one of a million
    And i don't want to let you go.

    (Chorus:)
    So c'mon give me a try,
    I promise you'll find,
    The love that defines,
    The truth behind the word,
    Let it work tonight,
    I'll help find the way, (Help Find The Way)
    Coz it’s you i'll wait

    (Verse 2:)
    It's been long, since i saw your face
    It's been 11 hours, and i just can't wait
    To me, every single second counts when you’re near...
    Let's try, the future together
    One life, we'll cling onto each other
    Let's dance, to the stars of heaven
    And let's stay together forever.




    Submitted on 2007-02-28 10:13:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love it. So sweet and you are really good at writing songs. Keep it going.
    | Posted on 2007-02-28 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]



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