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    dots Submission Name: Eva Novadots
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    Author: Mr.Ordinary
    ASL Info:    21/M/Navy
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 64/102/41
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 692
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 885



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       i woret this in german where it amde a whole lot more sence but i hope that i got the isea through. and the eva nove was orginally a song iw as trying to write but that version never worked but i do have a song evea nove mabey i will post it somewhere so you guys can hear it. but yeah the "eva Nova" is kinda like: "eeevvva Nooovvvaa" like its longer than just reading it. bleh i wish that i could exsplain it better cause this really is asume if you could just hear it read instead of reading it.


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    dotsEva Novadots
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    Eva Nova
    My life is beautiful
    Eva Nova
    Your are perfect
    Eva Nova
    I love you
    Eva Nova
    Iíve come for you
    Eva Nova
    My only one
    Eva Nova
    Love me, loving you
    Eva Nova
    From where we came
    Eva Nova
    To where were going
    Eva Nova
    We are beautiful
    Eva Nova
    Whatís your sign
    Eva Nova
    Letting me know
    Eva Nova
    That you are ready
    Eva Nova
    Ill be here waiting
    Eva Nova
    Forever for you
    EEEEEEVA NOOVA!!!
    I donít want you to cry
    Eva Nova
    Never say Good-bye!
    Eva Nova
    You are perfect for me
    Eva Nova
    Thatís Why Ill wait
    Eva Nova
    Just donít underestimate me
    Eva Nova
    Donít break me
    EEEEEEVA NOOVA!!!
    I love you




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      you should sing this to me, i would love to hear it from you mr. ben
    | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by tennisfuzz | [ Reply to This ]
      Actually I like the fact that you repete.. I love it.. You are realy good at this writting songs thing.. I wish I could write songs but... I have never been able to get beyond a few lines...

    Amanda

    Its verry sweet...
    | Posted on 2007-02-28 00:00:00 | by allmine | [ Reply to This ]
      Its long and repetitive. It you were to through the Eva Nova in ever 5th, then it might be alright, but no. It sounds more like lyrics for a metal band really. It wasnt bad though, for what it is I mean. Id only have to say to try for longer sentences and not repeat the same word over and over!!!!

    Peace DA69
    | Posted on 2007-02-28 00:00:00 | by Dark Divinity | [ Reply to This ]


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