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    dots Submission Name: The damneddots
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    Author: JaredD
    ASL Info:    16,male. U.S
    Elite Ratio:    1.52 - 6/6/16
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 76
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 635



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       A poem about a lost little girl in the world.


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    dotsThe damneddots
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    The Damned


    Over the river,
    Through the fog.
    On a tree,
    Sits a girl.
    She sits in a cemetery,
    With a tear in her eye.
    Before her face,
    Swim the dead.
    They call to her,
    And she weeps.
    For the lost,
    And the damned.
    The dead swim before her.
    A girl sits in a cemetery,
    With a gun to her head.
    The dead swim before her.
    And she squeezes the trigger,
    The dead laugh before her.
    Pulling her deeper,
    Her face joins the dead.
    The horrible, twisting, dancing dead.
    The Damned




    Submitted on 2007-02-28 21:24:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Kinda choppy near the end and somewhat repetitive in the middle. twisted topic though. Like that part. sad but twisted.
    | Posted on 2007-03-01 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]



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