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    dots Submission Name: Salvationdots
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    Author: JaredD
    ASL Info:    16,male. U.S
    Elite Ratio:    1.52 - 6/6/16
    Words: 297
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 68
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1766



    Description:
       A song about broken love's salvation


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    Salvation


    Purge me one more time please,
    Make these Demons go away before I die.
    I beg you, cause the nightmares to cease.
    All I ever wanted was to see the blue sky.


    Take my hand make me fly,
    Down down down to the ground.
    Take my hand make me cry,
    One more time before I hit the ground.



    These hands are too stained for salvation.
    Nothing can erase what I've done for my damnation.
    My life can never be the same,
    All that I've done is too evil to be put to name.

    Take my hand make me fly,
    Down down down to the ground.
    Take my hand make me cry,
    One more time before I hit the ground.


    Let me see that deep blue sky one more time,
    I want to see your beautiful eyes for the last second.
    Breathe your sweet breath and make me live to see one more blessed sign,
    That one day your faith in what I have done will be restored.


    Take my hand make me fly,
    Down down down to the ground.
    Take my hand make me cry,
    One more time before I hit the ground.


    True salvation will never be mine, but with your help I can live with it.
    I can live with the pain and nightmares,
    If you just take my hand when it's over and tell me it's worth it.
    I'll believe you and let the nightmares bleed me dry

    I know you'll save me


    Take my hand make me fly,
    Down down down to the ground.
    Take my hand make me cry,
    One more time before I hit the ground.


    You'll save me.




    Submitted on 2007-02-28 21:25:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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