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    dots Submission Name: Bleeddots
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    Author: JaredD
    ASL Info:    16,male. U.S
    Elite Ratio:    1.52 - 6/6/16
    Words: 318
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Religious
    Total Views: 166
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1979



    Description:
       About baseless faith


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    dotsBleeddots
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    Bleed


    Come now all ye sinners and bleed for your gods.
    Bleed for the sinners of the wasted lands.
    Bleed for the warriors with gleaming spears,
    Die for the bloodless lips of the fools.

    Die your hearts screaming death all over the sick twisted mindless page of your souls,
    Hold up the torch for the next fool to put out, for their sick nightmare's fury.
    Bleed for the ones who are lost.
    Bleed for the souls who have no home.
    Bleed for them without cost.


    Come all ye faithful to the testing of the gods,
    Watch the struggles as their faith tears them apart.
    See the blood flow from the veins of the dogs.
    Let their armor rust in pieces of Hell's fury.

    Die your hearts screaming death all over the sick twisted mindless page of your souls,
    Hold up the torch for the next fool to put out, for their sick nightmare's fury.
    Bleed for the ones who are lost.
    Bleed for the souls who have no home.
    Bleed for them without cost.



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    Come all ye dead and watch the living fall
    Bleed in step of the cursed skeletal dance.
    Watch the timeless quickening of nothingness
    It's your only reward.

    Die your hearts screaming death all over the sick twisted mindless page of your souls,
    Hold up the torch for the next fool to put out, for their sick nightmare's fury.
    Bleed for the ones who are lost.
    Bleed for the souls who have no home.
    Bleed for them without cost.

    Die your hearts screaming death all over the sick twisted mindless page of your souls,
    Hold up the torch for the next fool to put out, for their sick nightmare's fury.
    Bleed for the ones who are lost.
    Bleed for the souls who have no home.
    Bleed for them without cost.




    Submitted on 2007-02-28 21:28:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      such imagery, i know im not supposed to comment on the technichally but, god such imagery, its great, i love it!

    Die for the bloodless lips of the fools.

    I love it, it so.....grr my words never cease to fail me. It's very good, i know that sounds stupid in the sense of the poem but its all my feeble mind can get out. good job
    Vynom
    | Posted on 2007-03-01 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]



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