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    dots Submission Name: With Joydots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 623
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       I have not been able to visit the site for several weeks and am finding success, slowly but surely, in my endeavors.

    I'm just thankful to be here and taking each day with a smile ~ not fearful of circumstance but embracing of opportunity.

    Love, Peace & Joy to ALL

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    dotsWith Joydots

    With Joy in my heart
    Grace by my side
    and Faith as the guide
    I AM
    With a shield of divine
    Love as a sword
    All is but reward
    I AM

    Submitted on 2004-06-08 14:49:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow. i am guess that this poem is about jesus. it is really good. the fact that you didn;t mention anything about jesus or the lotd makes the poem extremely good and a excellent write. keep up the good work. and remember, jesus loves you!
    | Posted on 2004-06-08 00:00:00 | by EdwardScissorhands | [ Reply to This ]
      I also like poetry that is spiritual without preaching religion. I know "I AM" is a Christian reference, but like ES says, it's indirect. So, glad you could stop back.
    | Posted on 2004-06-08 00:00:00 | by Sandburg | [ Reply to This ]

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