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    dots Submission Name: I don't want to be alone...dots
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    Author: PryncessVynom
    ASL Info:    21/f/amarillo Tx
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 983/1060/230
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 217
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1044



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       I wrote this while listening to "Black Hole Sun" by Soundgarden. I hope that it makes some kind of sense


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    I can't believe it. I wanted for so long to be alone, and now as I walk the deserted halls of what used to be my home, I regret it. The silence is deafening, the stench is awful. Outside is worse. In my mind I pictured an empty world where everyone was just gone. Just not there, vanished. I never planned on where the bodies of all the lost would go. They still lay where the fell. It all happened in just a moment I guess. Between one breath and the next. I don't know for sure, I was asleep. It couldn't have been instant though because there are bodies in the road, the ends of there fingers bloody where they clawed at the hot asphalt. It must have been painful. I don't know why I was spared. I wish I hadn't been. I miss them all so much. I don't want to be alone.
    "I DON'T WANT TO BE ALONE!" The scream reverberates off of the nearest houses. I never knew there was an echo. It's been so long since I've screamed. "I don't want to be alone...Please, someone."




    Submitted on 2007-02-28 23:46:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It seems you longed to be solitary, but maybe only for the safety. Now in your reflection you are not as fulfilled as you thought you might be. Maybe that is your spirit questioning the means by which you act, maybe your heart wants you to dig deeper and try something new. Take a risk and be daring. When you look around I am sure you will find you are not alone, you just feel that way. I hope you find your inspiration soon
    | Posted on 2008-02-02 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      That was pretty good, I could actually see the bodies crawling on hot asphalt. Excellent
    | Posted on 2007-03-01 00:00:00 | by JaredD | [ Reply to This ]
      wow,that was beutiful,i mean that was really amaqzing work,in fact it was actualy kind of sexy...nice write keep it up,check out some of mine let me know what you think
    | Posted on 2007-03-01 00:00:00 | by thehiddenone | [ Reply to This ]



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