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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    19/M/Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 79/226/142
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 180
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    this devil inside will not seek peace
    with every passing minute my morals further deplete
    stability unravelled, with no glimpses of hope
    nothing more to cherish, forever have to cope

    listening inside, deep within inner crevices
    i hear dumbfounded cries from impure godless menaces
    broken down, and shattered into many pieces
    failure imprinted tenfold as the gentle soul ceases

    push back against the wall that is surrounding
    hellish screams justify the terror that is sounding
    commited into ashes, flaws within the brightest star
    a wilted rose by any means, heartless souls forever scarred




    Submitted on 2007-03-01 11:04:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think this may be my favorite of all of yours. The age old tale of the battle between the good and evil in ourselves told very beautifully. I loved it.

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    | Posted on 2007-03-01 00:00:00 | by Amanda Lynn | [ Reply to This ]



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