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    dots Submission Name: I'm Dirtydots
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    Author: DBC
    ASL Info:    21/m/ar
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 55/59/29
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 819
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 434



    Description:
       its about being sexually violated.


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    dotsI'm Dirtydots
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    point at where he touched you on the doll
    tell us everything you saw, dont remember too much alchohol

    im dirty
    you touched me
    im so dirty
    please dont hurt me

    Thought that i could trust you
    shows what i knew
    must've been my fault
    i must be an easy target too

    im dirty
    you touched me
    im so dirty
    please dont hurt me




    Submitted on 2007-03-01 11:24:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well this a hard subject to write on.... o have somthing here but really to short to be a song....kinda of choppy but othen than dat u have somthing here.


    well hoep to hear from ya

    Max
    | Posted on 2007-03-10 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]


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